According to feedback of this, I have used an apprpriate register, and I have a good variety of fonts. However, the current colour scheme is rather unclear, and there are other little issues like overused '!'s and the puff's usage of 'MP3'- 'tracks' might be a better word choice. Also, it was also suggested that I add more coverlines.
I think that I am working well towards the A-grade criteria:
- I believe that my layout demontrates some measure of magazine conventions.
- I am showing awareness of the need for variety in colours and fonts.
- I am accurately using language in relation to my target audience (older teens/young adults)
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